hi,
Our current statement is:
"To empower the Corvallis community to realize the harmony of human powered transportation by providing inclusive and flexible resources."
 
I prefer 'create' over 'provide'. and to order flexible before inclusive, so I propose:
"To empower the Corvallis community to realize the harmony of human powered transportation by creating flexible and inclusive resources."
 
Then there is the tag line on our home page, that starts as
"The Bicycle Cooperative empowere the Corvallis..."
which is fine by me.
 
I am also working on the 30 second elevator pitch, which should include our vision, and more.
Mark,